you've managed to make this relatable and cliche yet not stale or predictable, i cant explain it, but you manage to use cliches to your advantage and give your writing more life instead of making it boring. also you've managed to write about something positive not negative, yet the emotions are conveyed clearly and powerfully. wow!

Ok... I should have saved my first crit until after reading your other work... This is perfect. With such subtle... yet just magnificent imagery. Feeling into words. Perfect.

Another good poem.. I love how your poems flow. It's really great.