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| Fabala33 2006-12-14 ch 1,   | Beautiful poem! I see you haven't updated in awhile like me... does college suck up all your writing time too? |
| Cianna Greenwood 2006-10-18 ch 1, | This is very good; it has the feeling of song lyrics as I read it. The emotion is very well conveyed as well. |
| WannaBWriter 2006-10-11 ch 1, | unbelievable! "I don want to be forgotten/ And here I am crying/ Here I am dying/ I am bleeding once again" those are some of the greatest lines ever. i felt the pain and the lonliness of this piece. simply brilliant! |
| sarah1491 2006-10-08 ch 1, | Great job with this one. I really like the italics in some areas, as well as the way your stanzas are broken up. Poems with stanzas appear more organized and theyy also look longer (which is a plus ^_~) This poem is very sad, and I hope it is not really what your true feelings are at this time, because nobody likes being depressed. :( Very nicely written. :) - Sarah Oh, by the way, it would be greatly appreciated if you could review some of my newer poems, as well as the new chapters of my stories. I know you have reviewed my poems before, and I am grateful for that, and if you could goive me some advice on how to improve my newer poems I would like that a lot. Good luck with your writings, I will check back another day! :) |
| Sakura Taking 2006-09-30 ch 1, | Nice rhyming! Very well written. A great job indeed. |
| Kuzuki Sugimorii 2006-09-11 ch 1, | Ah, yes. I was wondering if you would put this up. Still no luck with a title, I see. Anyway, I'm supposed to be reviewing now. I think it reads much smoother in my head than the first time I saw it, and it sounds good read aloud. I haven't read much of your works lately, but this is definitely one of my better-liked pieces of yours. |
| Princess-anna57 2006-09-10 ch 1, | Well written. Keep writing. ~Anna~ |