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writergurlLW
2008-07-24
ch 1,
abuseThis was funny...and it really hurt my eyes to read. I hate how the english language has been murdered! But I won't go on about that rant; I imagine I will never want to stop.

I remember when I first joined this site. I was Lady Warrior and eleven years old. I had the most mary sue female character possible. Now that I'm 16, I got bored and decided to track all of my old posts down just to see how much I've changed over the years. I swear I was just like this. I almost cried in humiliation. What would all the people who go to my tutorials say if they saw that...

Anyway, what I'm trying to say is this was marvelously funny and well done (in the sense that you perfectly portrayed what you were trying to portray). From what I read on your profile, you're a really interesting person.

~WrierGurlLW, Admin of Writers Haven (writershaven.tk)
Frozen.by.Sloth
2008-07-16
ch 1,
abuseDude, hah. Amazing.

Although, for a guy, you certainly do have a way with portraying Seemingly half-retarded immature girls. ...and I mean that as a good thing. (...I think)

:) Made my day. Things like satire, irony and sarcasm make my world spin, and you're currently helping it out a bit.

Thanks for sharing

Enjoy da life~
Racquet
2008-07-04
ch 1,
abuseYou forgot the part in which the penguin thing submerged itself in crack and ate a rubber eraser!
Geez you *(^)%^$#^@$#^$&*%$(%$^&(%(%^&%&^%& SIDEWAYS!
Trish xx
2007-12-12
ch 1,
abuseROFL, zomg. You have struck a blow for anti-psychotic-little-girls* all over the universe. You are my idol (:

Sometimes you just feel like saying (well, typing), "You're not good at summaries? Sweetie, you ain't good at writing, either. Please do not force your drivel down anyone else's throat, for the love of Pete."

Again, amazing. And hilarious.

Trish xx

PS: glad to see that you're not afraid of proclaiming your faith.

*But, then again, like I can talk. We all went through that phase.
Robbertomo Jerome Straightp...
2007-06-28
ch 1,
abuseI laugh hysterically, Mr. Satire. Your name suits you.

This, in my opinion, is one of the most annoying things on FictionPress. You know, people who shouldn't be here. Good to know I'm not the only one annoyed. ;)

Now to look up your other stuff...
SAKoi
2007-06-27
ch 1,
abuse...(...) ...(...)... ... YAY!?!?!
Victoria Barlow
2007-06-06
ch 1,
abuseOh gosh this is hilarious and kind of odd at the same time. I loved it! Keep it up!
Gypsy Pink
2007-06-03
ch 1,
abuseWhat's a bowflex body?
Gossamer Heart
2007-05-20
ch 1,
abuseExcuse me while I find a way to replace my spleen. It exploded from laughter don't you know? I think I ought to sue you for that... ;)

-SG
Broken Fairytales
2007-05-19
ch 1,
abuseThis was so hilarious. Great job^_^

-Sapphire
elisefey
2007-05-14
ch 1,
abuseLOL! Nice. Very nice. Though you forgot the "ZOMG insanely hot!" and most popular guy who the main character girl (written in first person of course) hates and always fights with even though they're secretly in love with each other... No. Seriously. I'm not kidding. Shoot me.
vballgurl
2007-05-13
ch 1,
abusehahahaha!! this is awesome!
keiji kunoichi
2007-05-09
ch 1,
abuseNice. It's very sad... but so true. I mean I even use to do this (although that was when I was younger... by 13 I had learned not to be so random xD) although my bad gramar hasn't totally gone away. Good job and EXCELENT portrayl!
Angelic Winter
2007-05-02
ch 1,
abuseHaha, that completely made my day.
Unfortunately, I have to agree that this does occur one too many times here at Fictionpress.
I'm fourteen, and I remember being somewhat-similar to that when I was around 10-11. It's a sad phase, but give them a chance, they'll get over it.

And Happy Bunny PWNS U!
its.Nothing.Special
2007-04-22
ch 1,
abuseAAHH! Sad, but true.

Ahem. Jonah was a prophet (oo-ooh), but he really never got it (sad, but true). And if you watch it you can spot it (a-doodley-doo) He did not get the point!

Okay, sorry. I was just watching Veggie Tales. Do you like Veggie Tales? Speaking of unicorns.. :P

Okay, this was...gold, classic, classicly gold, or whatever old-people terms my brother uses. I prefer sugary. Omgg! Sugar!

...I do believe you poisoned me with the straw you used to suck my (HUGE...ahem) brain out, 'cause I really can't think right now. Ahh. Save me. I'm dying.

So basically, this rocked, like, lots of socks. Yes, even the toe-socks and bitten socks and stinky socks and pajama socks...hehhe. PJs rule.

I'll stop.

Starting...now. This was supakewl omgg i kant buhleev u rote this cuz its so supakewl and lol i was laffin n stuff cuz it was so funny too. Okay, okay..starting NOW!

Bye.

;)becky

P.S. Mwaha. I'm not sorry for wasting your time. Okay, sorry. I liked this a lot. Even though I'm thirteen and I like Happy Bunny.
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