Trajik... you are a stupid little human. Ivalice is a sequel to Blizzara. I can't even remember how to spell that now... it's been too long, in a weird way...

Um... well, where do I begin. Perhaps with saying that I didn't get nearly through all of this - I could tell after reading the first few lines that it wasn't going to be worth my time. You should SLOW DOWN. Take some time to describe the characters and their surroundings, because, seriously, I have no idea what's going on, who's there, or why it matters.

Try again.