 Icyfire4w5 2009-10-24 . chapter 1No matter how hard I try to appreciate the Tudors, I hardly know anything about them. I think that you've an interesting concept here--hair colour might reflect one's personality. However, I've spotted some typos here and there. |
 Beyond-the-Shadows 2008-04-30 . chapter 1I like this- another side to Elizabeths ahir color- pretty cool. |
 KingAndrewI 2007-09-18 . chapter 11. Mary's hair was just as red as Elizabeth's.
2. Elizabeth didn't die her hair, she wore wigs that were far more red then her real hair, which was reddish-brown. Mary actually dyed her hair different colors. |
 Aetherwyn 2007-01-16 . chapter 1To be honest, I like this as well. Truthfully, though, Elizabeth did kill around... what was it?... eight hundred Catholics, so, yeah, it's kind of ignored there. Not that it's shallow, but still. XD
Anyway, I like the idea of it, and I personally thought it was well written. So good job. |
 mad about books 2006-10-12 . chapter 1I like this!Elizabeth's point of view here comes across as believable... |
 Somnia 2006-09-26 . chapter 1Yep, promising. I like your economy with words but do think you could expand on this quite a lot. But, as a snapshot, it is good.
And people with red hair shouldn't find offense. Geez, you'd think you'd insulted that person personally! |
 yellow pen 2006-09-16 . chapter 1fascinating. very powerful. i had never thought of it that way before |
 Lord-of-Fools 2006-09-13 . chapter 1Uh... I have red hair. :| And are you forgetting that Queen Elizabeth ALSO killed a couple hundred Catholics, so it's a bit shallow to say Mary killed more people. And what about King James of Scotland, Mary Queen of Scot's son?
I'm sorry, but I found this positively hilarious. There are some very silly spelling mistakes. |