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| LipoAccipitridae 2006-09-11 ch 1,   | Not bad... But it's September 11th if I'm not wrong.And... erm... try not to personalise the event itself.No, I don't know what I'm talking about. (poem and hand and begAn)Ah, whatever. Good luck anyways. XD~ |
| from beneath the bell jar 2006-09-11 ch 1, | Great poem - and perfect timing. I was still crying because of an article and some pics I was looking at. Horrific thing 9/11 was. One suggestion - you should do some proof-reading, there were just a few spelling errors and you put September ninth instead of eleventh. Everything else was great. You should check out my new poem "Fair Juliet" |