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| Prideful Mutt 2006-09-26 ch 1,   | Really like this one. Yes, my story was rushed. I didn't have many days to really get in depth and talk to my characters to find out who they really are but I have other books/stories up that have more developed characters and plot Peace, fairies, and coffee Tink |
| classic violet 2006-09-20 ch 1, | Vivid, kind of tragic in a way. I love 'The melted remains of my identity', truly truly gorgeous. For some reason this poem reminded me of a delicate fashion model or something you'd find in some fancy magazine. |
| toxic-noodle725 2006-09-13 ch 1, | short and simple but very creative. well done. |
| BenevolentShadow 2006-09-13 ch 1, | "I was glad because, suddenly I could be anyone." Peer pressure often makes it difficult to chang who your are or be yourself. I'm gald you could find away.Great job with this poem, it has a nice ring to it. |
| from beneath the bell jar 2006-09-11 ch 1, | I really enjoyed this - the emotions portrayed here were vivid. Great piece! You should check out my new poem "Fair Juliet" |