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Reviews For: Hope and Anchor

Sarah-Brighteyes
2006-12-10
ch 1,
Wow.

A topic totally original. War is not... and peace is not... but the poem itself.. bringing a new culture, a new landscape, a new heart song into the piece was amazing.

I love the children harmonizing... its so sad and yet the poem is almost a drawn out note when you read it.

Very good.

Bravo. Write on.
beti213
2006-09-22
ch 1,
my favorite part of this poem is how you have the poem actually balancing on "fear." gorgeous... the capitalization was strange and I don't really understand it... other than that those are "big ideas," I guess... good job. keep writing!
from beneath the bell jar
2006-09-12
ch 1,
Great poem! So much imagery and so vivid! Great piece - sad, but in its way beautiful.

You should check out my new poem "Fair Juliet"
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