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| Sarah-Brighteyes 2006-12-10 ch 1, | Wow. A topic totally original. War is not... and peace is not... but the poem itself.. bringing a new culture, a new landscape, a new heart song into the piece was amazing. I love the children harmonizing... its so sad and yet the poem is almost a drawn out note when you read it. Very good. Bravo. Write on. |
| beti213 2006-09-22 ch 1, | my favorite part of this poem is how you have the poem actually balancing on "fear." gorgeous... the capitalization was strange and I don't really understand it... other than that those are "big ideas," I guess... good job. keep writing! |
| from beneath the bell jar 2006-09-12 ch 1, | Great poem! So much imagery and so vivid! Great piece - sad, but in its way beautiful. You should check out my new poem "Fair Juliet" |