I love the phrase from John Smith! It's brilliant and the way you fit it in is great. I like how you sorta continue on each verse with the same subject. It could have been better titled, though. 'Cloud Wisps' doesn't really interest people. To me, at least, it sounds like some poem by someone with a 6-year-old grasp of the language. The summary in broken english doesn't help. I suggest you change the title, or at least the summary. What i do is usually put a line from the poem-just a suggestion.

wow - descriptive - i wish i could write like that

all-in-all very nice poem