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| Ty Taco 2008-06-27 ch 1,  | abuseaw... |
| HaPpYGuRl 2007-12-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseOmiGoD!That was cute! |
| Centi the Yaoi Hime 2007-10-29 ch 1, | abuseI think I'd be amused to see that youtube video. Anyway haha I loves on fluff hardcore |
| KissMyConverse 2007-09-22 ch 1, | abuseBwahaha. I loved this. So amusing, yet oh so cute. |
| write-it-like-you-mean-it 2007-06-19 ch 1, | abuseomg I loved it that was so great im putting it in my faves list!! |
| Momoro 2007-06-18 ch 1, | abuseI was just thinking about how wonderful this story is (while reading it for probably the fifth time) when I realised I never reviewed it! So, it's very cute, and short, and sweet. I also loved seeing Caleb and Brenden in Dante's sequel. :D |
| Tohru Daihikashousha 2007-04-28 ch 1, | abuseI saw that video I think... was the one guy going to be married some time? It was like seven minutes long! ^^ |
| Satan'z Myth 2007-04-22 ch 1, | abuseReally nice story... damn, am speechless, and have no clue what to say ! Am off to read the sequel ! ;) (btw... if you could, could you you give me the URL to the youtube video??) |
| wake of beauty 2007-04-10 ch 1, | abuseOhh, it was sweet. Nice job. =) |
| hello there lovely 2007-03-06 ch 1, | abuseaww that was so cute!! :) |
| slayerit 2007-02-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhat a cute story! BTW- I know exactly which YouTube vid you're talking about... and I actually thought this story was kinda similar when I was reading it. I think I've watched that video WAY too many times... |
| tormented eyes 2007-01-05 ch 1, | abuseI liked it! I have a shoft spot for plots like this. Oh, and slash; mustn't forget that.^^ One thing though: you used the same word three times in one paragraph. Stuff like that bugs me a little. Good job otherwise. And I think I've seen this video you speak of. ^.~ |
| camikaza 2006-11-22 ch 1, | abuseoy! and another great fic! I hope you will write a sequel about dante! |
| Michael Henson 2006-11-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseOMG, that was beautiful I freaking loved it! Write more, just for me, please! I need it now! I might die if i dont read more! |
| firestar267 2006-10-11 ch 1, | abuseI love this. Simple as really, lol. Your writing style is relaly good and the ending with shayna and mariel?! oh my god what a good touch! Keep it up and write more please! |