|Reviews for I Dug Myself a Pit|
| checkerboxed 9/12/06 . chapter 1
Hmm. Usually, in poems like this, the rhymes seem forced. But your words just flow off the tongue.
I love the lines "And if I crouch, I can just barely fit my pride/ It's really an abysmal place to hide."
On the other hand, I think the poem gets sloppy at the end.
Otherwise, lovely work. Keep it up.