It's really good so far, Rini. Still don't really know all of what's going on but I'm sure that will all be explained in time. =)

Let me know when you update, please! I don't really get it, but I still really like it!

you know how I loathe reviewing things but at your request, here goes nothing.

Dizzifying? It's cute, but technically rini, I don't think it's a real word. The word is "dizzying", I believe.

Other than that it's good, it gives me some story, but leaves me wanting to know more about the past you've hinted at. It makes me feel there's something more going on than a master/pet thing.

A good start. And yes, chapter 2 is still only a start. :p Write more. It has been demanded.

:3 ever since my Brant came into life, your writing has yet to disappoint me

sorry for depressingly weak review... tis late X.x;

Yay good fic! Your writing style is awesome. I love it. You randomly changed tenses, though, which was a little weird, but oh well :D these characters are really cool and the whole fic was a little surreal and it was awesome. Slightly incoherent midnight review yay!

Have to say, you did a really good job with this. I like it. :) Although, you might want to raise the rating slightly. Even if under-aged people read this and don't get it, still too inappropriate for the T rating. Over-all it's a good fic.

Y HALO THAR SLASH AND SHINY FABRIC AND DESCRIPTIVE ...DEXCRIPTIONS!