Reviews for I call this one My fauxdepression

Reviews For: I call this one My fauxdepression

Arcane Hero 2008-03-15 ch 1,	abuseAmen my sister. >.> I think I feel my hypocrisy (that word never looks right) begining to stir. XD
It's Whatever. 2008-02-17 ch 1,	abuseI have mixed feelings about this poem. On one hand, it's true that there are too many seemingly pseudo-depressed pre-teens out there. On the other hand, you never know what a person is really feeling. The topic has been covered before, but it wasn't a waste of my time either.
Scribe Of All Trades 2008-02-04 ch 1,	abuseMan, oh man is that true.
We Called Her Thalia 2007-06-02 ch 1,	abuseWell, I'm kind of impressed at how you provoked such a vicious response with a poem that in my opinion, made a point but not an impression. I think it's silly that some of your more opinionated reviewers weren't even capable of expressing a somewhat lucid remark, such was their indignant rage, and that any attempt at biting commentary fell completely flat in a laughable display of ignorance. Whether your poetry is good or not, to make people angry is in itself, an accomplishment. (by the way, I was thirteen and writing angst poetry about hacked-up unicorns practically yesterday. And I'm a sleazy emo cutter. But I still think you have a point.) We live in such an accepting world, don't we?
do the whirlwind 2007-05-05 ch 1,	abuseHaha! The greatest mockity-mock-mock ever!
thisisridiculous 2006-12-11 ch 1,	abusenot to invalidate YOUR views but it doesn't matter how old you are, anyone can have issues and anyone can vent. you are not the only one with pain, believe it or not. and i sincerly hope that those quotation marks were just for show, because if who ever said those things finds out, you will have to live with having hurt someone who was only trying to put themselves out there. next time think before you speak. your words have repercussions.
Lord of all Tragedy 2006-10-20 ch 1,	abuseoh my GOD. Not only have you utterly conflicted with your own message by writing in a rather aggressive way, but by reading through your other I can safely say who the are you to be giving advice to anybody? I find this segment of the poem ABSOLUTELY priceless Don’t write about your scars Or your “Tears that fall like rain” Because you “Have no idea What happiness is like” (Even though you love the beach) Don’t tell me “You don’t believe in love” Just because You’re not old enough To have felt it First off, you seem like the last person on earth who would know what love is like. For your general information, happiness doesn't have to mean a dick is stuck in or around you. Remember this, because i'm quite sure you're too blind to see this yourself. Say it a couple times, make it your mantra Also people write what they want to write about, I mean look at you "slutterfly", you seem perfectly capable of expressing your retarded views on life, and even more capable of spreading that moronic logic to others. I can imagine now, the many many poems you'll be writing soon about that new wave of Siphilis or Crabs you're sure to get sometime in the near future! Anyways, i'm going to add you to my authors alert list, to get a few laughs at whatever random ** you decide to spit out.
frozen.bear 2006-10-20 ch 1,	abuse...I can see your point. But it's good to write poetry when you're depress (in my case, bored). Besides You're not gonna write poetry when you're happy...you'll be running around the block, hanging out with friends and getting double tan (like me). But I reckon, they should give happiness a chance.
incandescente 2006-09-26 ch 1,	abuseyour sentences are short and straightforward. definately not for the faint of heart. :) I like the way the rhythm is choppy. It kinda shows me your emotions while writing this. e.g frustration. this poem is refreshingly honest and i like it. :) i do understand its your opinion, so yeah. :)
Ocean's Lover 2006-09-19 ch 1,	abuseheck yes! It's like the same over and over. Go you! Give them 12 year olds the old one two. lol :)
All Alone With Her Thoughts 2006-09-12 ch 1,	abuseI know some people will agree with you, but the fact is many people use their writting as a way to express themselves when they are feeling down or depressed. That's something you're going to just have to get over if you're going to read other people's work.~Rowan~

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