To answer your question, you live, and write, and breath, and laugh, and cry and be human.

Otherwise, it's a good expression of what you wanted to say. It's there. No one can dispute it. But, it doesn't feel... finished, or complete, or whole.

And, personally (I don't mean to offend, so please don't take it that way), if you're only writing it with the intention of waiting for reviews, and not because of yourself, then maybe that's why you're asking this question in the first place. Maybe that's why you've got the question and you aren't feeling particularly fulfilled. Maybe that's why you don't know what comes next.

Anyway, thank you for your review on my poem.

I really love this poem. It's short and straight to the point, and like one other reviewer already said, I've never seen a poem with a topic like this before. Very nice :)

Now, you wait. For reviews. And just...i dunno...i guess that is weird.

Cool! I know a lot of people who ask themselves the same thing, myself included. I don't think I've ever seen this as a topic in a poem on here... Very nice. Great job.

Fascinating, hehe. Well done. Write on!

Anna _