 BearHeart 2006-09-12 . chapter 1Wow! You have encapsulated the process in such a lovely way. This poem was a joy to read especially after having been through this kind of thing.
I'd hand you my heart, I'd let you break it I'd give you my life, "Here you can take it...
I don't know if it was intentional that these lines are more staccato than the rest but it works because of the message.
Excellent poem! |