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A. L. Spradling 2006-09-24 . chapter 1
Oh, the sweet realization that you deserve so much more. It's a victory that's invaluable.
Julie C. Lanister 2006-09-13 . chapter 1
I love it! I like the use of repetition at the end, and the change in mood from that stanza to the same one. If that makes sense. Haha. :)
caralita 2006-09-12 . chapter 1
(I'd never listen to anyone

when they said you did me harm.)

aint it the truth. when you love someone its so hard to not be blindsided.
BearHeart 2006-09-12 . chapter 1
Wow! You have encapsulated the process in such a lovely way. This poem was a joy to read especially after having been through this kind of thing.

I'd hand you my heart, I'd let you break it I'd give you my life, "Here you can take it...

I don't know if it was intentional that these lines are more staccato than the rest but it works because of the message.

Excellent poem!
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