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threeam
hey maria
2006-09-12 . chapter 1
I love short, succinct poems like this. They hold a lot of power in so few words. Well done.
JJJRRR
2006-09-12 . chapter 1
Three a.m.Here I sit, playing SolitaireTo clera my head and forgetAll the things you said
"its", "and", "about" = redundant words, not useful for point
otherwise good, I like
Elizabeth Bilberry
2006-09-12 . chapter 1
The simplicity is just lovely and emphasizes the emotions and message between the lines.
EB
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