I am invisible at all the wrong moments

mute at all the wrong times

I've wished for this before,

but never thought it to be real.

this is unique! most people can relate to that. and even the invisibilty itself can hold lots of meanings not only the ones apparant, sometimes when you feel that you are there yet not there..when your mind goes blank and all you feel is nothingness i beleive that is my invisibility lol...nice poem.

I do love this one. Very relateable

I can really relate to this poem! Good job on discribing the way it feels to be this way. Invisible. I love it!

i can completely relate to this poem! wonderful work! keep it up! :D

That's how I feel last year at school. Sweet poem

Yes, sometimes I feel this way in high school...this is something I can relate to. Good job.

I understand your poem very well. Back in high school (a long time ago it seems) I was the invisible person.

The repetition of certain elements (this word and that word) gives it more depth.

One request: be consistant on your capitilization. Otherwise, it becomes a bit distracting.

phantom_jedi

This is really powerful. I love the lines, "I am invisible at all the wrong moments/mute at all the wrong times". Very relatable. Good job! :D

Easy to relate to. Sad but good. Keep it up.

o I love this one. It speaks to me on so many different levels...

You have a lot of clear, thought-provoking ideas in this. Keep it up!

I really liked this, it was very deep. Here's my favorite part:"I am invisible at all the wrong moments

mute at all the wrong times" Great job )P.S. Thank you for the review!

First off, thanks for the reviews!

Second...you, my dear, are going on my favorite authors list. Your poetry is amazing! I love all of it!

Diana

this is really good! i really like it!

Wow! This is awesome. Great job!

I adore this poem. Really. *adds to favourite* Thanks for reviewing so much of my stuff!Rowan