I liked it. The last line was just so funny.
But there was a typo:
brake should be break.

I think his wife would want to take pictures.

Er. Were cameras invented?

Wow, me am **. Sorry. Ignore my stupidity, it's not normally so thoroughly... present. Anyway. This is good. The one thing that just sounds awkward to me, that I noticed, was that they call each other by their last names. I don't know. Maybe you did it on purpose. It just seemed out of place to me, that's all. Anyway. This is cute. Short, sweet. You know. All that jazz.

*Sigh*,
all your stories are so wonderful!
I think I'm a fan now, hehe.

Wow! This was really good. I especially love the little comment at the end about the wife. Nice, I've never read this genre before, so it's a new thing. Glad it was yours I read.

Delightful little story!

okay, I don't know what to say

Oh my gosh, this was so good! I like Historical Slash, too! I'm thinking of doing The Apache War Chief Geronimo and Chief Joseph...wanna help me?

-Mew-chan =^.^=

Very sweet, very AU, I like it. Except for a few little spelling errors ("breaks", not "brakes") I'd say you have promise.

I'd make it a bit longer though, maybe a bit more descriptive.