WOWEE. This is great. Good poetry is rare these days... most of it is bland... I feel like I've read the same "melancholy night of roses and broken hearts" several thousand times over.

Here, you've taken a topic that's very common about which to write poetry and you've put a new sort of twist on it. It could be because the snow isn't really the true focus of the poem, but even there, your topic of love is taken in a totally novel direction with original ways of describing it.

I really love how it can be assumed that the narrator and the "you" mentioned love each other even though you never mention any words like love or relationship or friend, etc.

So... great job. I need to check out the rest of your stuff.

i can't explain why, but i love this. you're amazing. =]