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Reviews For: Achille's Heel
La Terraza 2008-04-14 . chapter 1
** yeah dude! that was ** awesome! Three freaking cheers! that was grand indeed.
Seattle grunge-love 2007-01-03 . chapter 1
...arousing, and perfected. You are a master of poetry.
Ashlynn Matsumoto 2006-10-04 . chapter 1
HOLY (BEEP)! That was amazing...I mean absolutely, f-ing amazing...although I think that the 1st word of the 2nd stanza is misspelled. I THINK you mean clenching, but idk. ^_^ Riane.
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