Reviews for Where I have you is what you wanted

Scribe Of All Trades 2008-02-04 ch 1,	abuseAnother intriguing poem...
Chocolate Herrings 2007-02-07 ch 1,	abuse(And you won't Take your hands off my hips) That line. I don't know why but I read that line and I was like, 'Yeah. That's hot.' Only...I didn't say it in the Paris Hilton voice. Interesting that you wouldn't want to remember your first time doing either of those things.
Moondog Dozier 2006-09-19 ch 1,	abuseInterestingly vivid word flow. The situation is presented with such everyday language that it gives the reader the oppurtunity to fill in the details. Well written.