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Queen of Cyrum: Sasarai 2006-10-18 ch 3,	I don't know why, but I don't quite trust Natsuo. Weird, huh? Anyway, besides it being too short, I have no complaints. Very cute story so far! ^^
ainedamdz 2006-10-06 ch 3,	This was a cute chapter! Sorry it took me so long to review this chapter... Well, this is interesting... This just shows another side to Aida's confused personality... You closed this chappie nicely, it left me wanting to read more! So...Update soon! And btw, my pen name's ainedamdz, not ainedamdze! Heh, just thought you oughta know...^_^ Good luck in your writing!
Koorime-kid 2006-09-30 ch 3,	I'm glad he-I mean she, has a friend now^^ lol. Update soon! :D
FoxyGrampa 2006-09-30 ch 3,	The biggest problem I se in this story is essentially, it has no scenes. No scenes to really take in how these characters are, and how they interact with different things. It's jsut all very watered down scenerios. Not all bad, but not very good if you were to classify it as a manga. The only other problem I have with it is... is the cute guy going to fall in love with him as a girl? Uck. That creates angst, but personally I find it unflattering angst. It's angst that doesn't promise at least half of a happy ending. e_e Other than that, not bad. I dislike crossdressing stories for the reason I stated just now, the whole gender confusion. But this doesn't seem that bad, since he's actually having real issues with his situation. I'll be reading your update. Maybe try to set up some sort of scene since things kinda seemed set-up now..? It's your choice. n_n;
Niki Tori 2006-09-28 ch 3,	Whoa this chappie was good. But FAR TO FREAKING SHORT!! OMG this was SOO GOOD. annoucer: It's offical Niki is hooked to Truths and Facts!! Like I said...This CHAPPIE ROCKED!! I can't wait till the next one!! Wee!! Well until next time LovE YA Niki!! PS: Thanks so much for the Ad!! It really helped!!
Queen of Cyrum: Sasarai 2006-09-25 ch 2,	Well, first off, too short! (But that was good for me in my rush) I will have to come back and reread it sometime, more properly, without being rushed. I particularly liked the ending scene when everything was going so wrong, then he saw his sister. Banging into someone, he forgets all about her (and she's the reason he's in this mess!) It just shows more of what an idiot he is. Haha, I like it. I'll check this again on Thursday.
Queen of Cyrum: Sasarai 2006-09-25 ch 1,	I have a story VERY similar to this. (Very) Anyway, it's harder than I thought to find any decent shounen ai around here. I can't comment yet on your shounen ai since there hasn't been any yet, but it's a good start to a story. I was a little confused with the transition at the beginning, but it was probably the chapter break line, right? (Mine won't work on this site for some reason) It is good that you already know how many chapters you will write, it shows organization. (also the weekly updates) Anyway, I have to hurry and read the next chapter; I have a hearing to go to...
Koorime-kid 2006-09-22 ch 2,	I love the ending! It's a good cliffhanger, even though I hate cliffhangers lol. Keep writing! No writer's block for you! :D
ainedamdz 2006-09-22 ch 2,	Wow, that was cool. Hm... SO fast, don't you think? But well, I have a feeling the fun part's about to come! More please! Update soon... good luck!
ainedamdz 2006-09-22 ch 1,	Well, that was quite good. Bit fast-paced maybe, but still entertaining. Ehrm... is the male lead a gay? Anyway, I think this is a pretty catchy story. You should continue it, I'm sure it'll attract more readers if they knew that this wasn't going to be on hiatus. Okay then. I'm reading the next chapter, be dropping a review then. >>
Niki Tori 2006-09-21 ch 2,	Cool! I like this story alot! It has a very nice flow to it! Until chappie two!! Luv Niki!
Immoral Haki 2006-09-21 ch 2,	Oh wow.. I wonder what's going to happen at the stranger's house. Hopefully nothing too 'inappropriate'. -insert laugh here-
Evol-chan 2006-09-15 ch 1,	I really realy lke this... But how's he gonna survive if he's a dunce??
Immoral Haki 2006-09-15 ch 1,	Wow, the prologue is pretty good. You should continue the story because I can't wait to read the rest of it.
Niki Tori 2006-09-13 ch 1,	COOL! It is really funny! Liked how the prologue pulled me in! I can't wait intil Chappie one! Oh yeah can you check out The Red Waves for me!I'd really appreciate it!! LUV NIKI!!

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