Wow this was amazing!
I'm completely hooked and attached to the characters!
Please please keep up the awesome job!

You do such an awesome job describing their swim competitions. It's like being in the pool with them and feeling that adrenaline rush. CONGRATS TO KEIRA FOR BEATING SNOBBY ANDREW!

-alicia

I loved it! Your writing reminds me very much of Meg Cabot, and I'm very serious. Good job, looking foreward to reading more. I'm somewhat intrigued by the best friend Nick, and I'm not sure why...:)

((Cheers,
Rowania))

AW SO AWESOME!

Hey I'm her EXACTLY her height and I'm 109 pounds. M. Hey can I go on a date with her? (laughs.)

This story is amazing. I read up to this chapter, but you made me laugh, you made me cry (her parents, her anorexia, etc.) She is so cute.

It remembers me so much of my friends and I (they are all guys).

It is really nice I love it! keep your good work :)

Awesome story! Is there gonna be an epilogue?

Wow. This story is really good. I absolutely LOVE all the detail that you put into all the swimming parts and it's just really amazeing. Wow. This is one of my new favorite stories for sure. Is it almost over though? It seemed like it is, like maybe one or two chapters left? Well is there going to be a sequel? Like maybe with Colin as a competing love interest? That would surely be interesting. Not that I don't love Cam, it's just... I don't know, believe it or not, Colin won my heart immediatly. There's something about him... oh well. It's your choice. Update soon.

OMG this story is AMAZING and you have GOT to update or I will personally kill you or keep you to myself so you write... understood? Nah, i'd never do that. Anyways, I'm BEGGING you, something I don't do often, PLEASE UPDATE!
-K

OMG! I hated the fight so much!! And Cam is just SO sweet!! I love him... Not really, just, you know, his sweetness and all! Oh, God, I wish something like HIM happened to ME! Not likely... Oh well, I love this story!
-K

I don't have much time to write, but this chapter is really cool! I mean, FINALLY! Keira and Cam were so thick... how could they have NOT noticed how they, like, LOVED each other? And Kei has such a low self-esteem! Seriously! Ugh! Sometimes I just feel like kicking her so she gets back to her senses! Anyways, great story, and the sad part was amazing...
I really like your writing style, though you should be careful when you type because you often make the too/to mistake and the your/you're mistake too. Also, in this chapter, tons of words seem to be missing, apart from the bad ones like ** and **...
I THINK that's what they were, right?
Anyways, here's my part of 'constructive criticism' for tonight!
-K

This is truly an amazing story... I love it. Seriously.
-K

So far this story is amazing... But this chapter is SO sad!! God, I even cried, y'know? I mean, I usually cry with books, and this is the first time I read anything apart from a book that's made me cry... Poor Keira...
-K

That was just the sweetest thing!
It's not over yet, is it??
This story is so cute and I look forward to (hopefully) reading more of it.
Keep up the awesome writing!

Lovely Story,
HBW or Julia E*

Ooh, am i sensing a lil something-something there between Keira and Colin?
Great story, i love the whole 'only girl in an all boys school' thing...

I love this story so bad!! It's really cool!
-K