 Piroko Hatake 2009-07-21 . chapter 3I like it! Those guys are friggin' hilarious!
More please! |
 autumn-annette-19 2008-09-18 . chapter 3Whats next, whats next. |
 abbybyrd 2008-03-27 . chapter 3*Squeal!* Another one of your stories I am absolutely loving! The ideas you have are so refreshingly original. And the people! Holy crap, I'm practically in love with all of them :) Rodney makes me giggle a lot and the way you've written them makes their NC totally understandable. *Happy sigh* They are all so damn cute!
I did notice that you haven't updated this fine piece for a couple years. Myself being a practicing procrastinator, I totally get that it sometimes takes a lot longer to finish things then you'd expect. That being said, I am really really praying you ARE procrastinating and haven't actually given up this story! It is way too good for you to not finish, in my opinion, and it only has three chapters so far! |
 i-see-faeries 2008-03-07 . chapter 3Aw, this is so awesome. Setting it up as teams of thre is just asking for threesomes. ;p I love it. And I love how you started telling the story from the brother's POV. It makes it more interesting. |
 Atsu 2008-02-04 . chapter 3Oh my God, wow! This is amazing. I love your style, and I love the characters. Wow. Just wow.
Sorry, coherent thought has left me. I'm stuck as an oozing pile of giddiness from reading this, and it's hard to think like that. I can't wait to see what happens next! |
 renru-no-ren 2008-01-10 . chapter 3update! this is ** awesome! |
 ren 2008-01-10 . chapter 1 **. I'm so ** excited. o.o no joke |
 Kate 2007-11-16 . chapter 3 Please write more of this and continue the good work. I have enjoyed all of your writing very much, and I look forward to anything else you might see fit to write. |
 Acesha Coeurl 2007-09-25 . chapter 3 Hello, just wanted to say i really like this story. It has a fascinating concept, and i really want to see where you go with it. |
 Fhulhi the Crazy 2007-05-25 . chapter 3I love this! I swear I've spent half my time reading this laughing. The narrator is great as are the rest of the characters. The setting and history is really great too; I really like the whole concept here. Hope you're able to update. I'd love to see more of this. |
 RoyallyScrewed 2006-11-30 . chapter 3You should finish this story *accusing glare* It's not like you to be so dissapointing, why did you stop? >.< This was on it's way to becoming one of my favs. |
 xanthofile 2006-11-21 . chapter 3my god, i love this. i really do. i'm fighting all kinds of smiles when i read, and it's not even what i mean to!
ok, i ramble.
just thought i'd let you know that you are a genius often. often. |
 Fei 2006-11-09 . chapter 3 I loves it already. More please! Very well written (like everything you write), unique, brilliant, the characters are amazing - I can picture them perfectly. I adore the way you've created the world, and look forward to seeing more of it unfold. |
 noname52 2006-09-25 . chapter 3An absolutely awesome story. Seriously you should definitely keep working on it!! |
 LetMeSing22 2006-09-23 . chapter 3I just want to let you know that I spent roughly 3 hours today reading all of the stories that you've posted on fictionpress. And I loved them all. Words simply cannot describe how happy you've made me.
Wel, maybe this one: AH!
But other than that, no.
:) |