what a touching story. nice work all around. perhaps maybe a little more descirptions would be nice, but that's it:)

Good Job.

Pretty sad.

OH MY GOD!*rocks back adn forth in a corner* this is the best thing i have read all night. and i have been on here for like 4 hours. i seriously got the chills when i read this. which is as close as i get to crying. be flattered/