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Reviews For: Carve My Skin

Flechette
2006-09-16
ch 1,
... don't know what to say about this one... I'd rather not brag about my own writing... I guess I can say thanks for writing this with me... we haven't written anything together in awhile... maybe we should do this again sometime soon... feel free to post any other songs that have your name on them... they are yours too you know... see ya later...
nectar in a sieve
2006-09-13
ch 1,
...

damn

hit it on the head, had someone showed me this a year or so i probably would have cried, now i just sit in stunned silence in one of those akward "i can identify with this way too well but do i tell a random person online"-moments

the chorus (bolded stuff) gives me a mixture of the goosebumps and that feeling when you just want to sit on the roof and reflect

you two are awesome for this

much love-brit
Princess-anna57
2006-09-13
ch 1,
Well done, and keep writing!

~Anna~ ^_^
ifitaintkatie
2006-09-13
ch 1,
wow thats pretty powerful. did you compose musical notes for it too? thatd be sweet.
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