|Reviews for beautiful, like death|
| The Melancholy Cocoa Bean 9/22/06 . chapter 1
aww so bittersweet. the images are simple but strong. i love it man. keep it up :D
| dress her up in fairytales 9/14/06 . chapter 1
the ending surprised me.
short, simple, nice piece nonetheless.
| polka dots and addictions 9/14/06 . chapter 1
"he came to you one night (& told you such pretty lies)"
i love that beginning. Great poem, i can relate so much. Its really well written and i love the bracketed bits.
| x account closed x 9/13/06 . chapter 1
i like it oh so much. has that kind of (slightly) twisted humor that makes me smile in an "i know" kind of way, with just enough tragicglamour mixed in to make me cringe with that same feeling.
i basically think you should copyright this line, it was quite brill :) :
"& he came again (and again, and again)& he still said the same lies"
gotta love anything with a double meaning :)
love it truelybrit
| ifitaintkatie 9/13/06 . chapter 1
very easy to relate to, haha. i like the beat that all the verses contain. i enjoyed this!