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| Rayne 2008-05-12 ch 9, anon. | abuseJust want you to know that I really adore this story =) Very cute. |
| Rayne 2008-05-12 ch 4, anon. | abuseHuh. I wonder how they're gonna have sex. Great story by teh way =) |
| Cinera 2008-04-21 ch 9,  | abuseI was wondering how you were going to end this. I liked the story just the same, although the ending was mildly cliche. But I can't say I would've liked it if Marcus had died and Jacob had gone on living, so I have no room to bitch. Great story! |
| Evelei 2008-04-11 ch 9, | abuseo.o Loved it! Extremely well written, and very very original actually. Yeah wizards, vampires and the such are a bit clishe and all. But your characters were very original as was your story. :) Hope you don't mind me adding this to my new C2 if so, lemme know and I'll remove it. |
| Curb Crasher 2008-03-08 ch 9, | abuseI am so happy that Galen finally found happiness. I was almost crying during all of those angsty parts where Galen was worried about his force and love and everything. . . . Thank you for writing this! |
| True.Randomness 2007-12-07 ch 9, | abuseI loved the story. It had my two favotie themes, romance and fantasy. I was wonderful! |
| Kuyeng13 2007-11-11 ch 4, | abuseo nice |
| Bleed The Dream 2007-07-17 ch 9, | abuseI liked the ending. It was sweet and and and... funny. |
| Ruri Star Sykel 2007-05-27 ch 9, | abuseWow that was emo! and cute and let's just say i loved it! |
| Aimee Straughston 2007-05-05 ch 9, | abuseAww, the end was so sweet. And kinda sad at the same time. Good job. Hard to find good vampire fic these days. |
| Fyre 2007-05-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseI loved the story though I think that the development of the romance was a bit rushed. He met Jacob and in three meetings he is in love? I think that Marcus needed to develop his feeling first, as he had just broken up Eli. Jacob should have needed a little more effort to break through his barriers. I also think that the end was also rushed. A bit more on the transformation and newness of the change. On a whole it was an excellent story that could be a masterpiece with a bit of revision. |
| Hybrid Rainbow 2007-05-01 ch 9, | abuseThat's it? No, actually, I think it was concluded very nicely. What an amazing story. *claps* |
| Whispery 2007-04-30 ch 9, | abuseI loved this story...I seem to now be reading all your stories I haven't read yet. I'm glad that you see Ian have a family and that Jacob changes galen...Even though he's like 30>.> Hehe...Over all I loved the story. Now off to read more of your stuff^_^ Whisp |
| Lady E 2007-04-29 ch 9, | abuseAbsolutely beautiful, like everything that comes from your pen. I think I enjoy your longer works better; always a bit more time to develop characters, and you do it enviously well. |
| Half-BloodGrlPirate 2007-04-27 ch 9, | abuseYES YES YES! THAT WAS A FANTASTIC FINISH! YOU ARE AWESOME XANTHOFILE AND I'M SO HONOURED TO HAVE READ THIS STORY AND YOUR OTHERS! Now, all I want is for you to update Rasta Guy, please? I've been waiting oh, so patiently and I think it's about time. This was awesomely written as all your other stories are. I just hope your fast updates are not declining. MANY HUGS, ♥ B.J./H-BGP ps. this is on my faves. you rock! |