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| Somewhere In Between 2006-10-19 ch 1, | i love how the visuals in this change so much; so drastically; and so fast. it's heart stopping. //Alex// |
| Guardrail 2006-09-14 ch 1, | I really liked this a lot. There seems to be a bit more to it than what the reader can see. I loved the last lines. Wonderfully written!! |
| BrokenandBeautiful 2006-09-14 ch 1, | o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o. i like it!! nice job... the only thing you could do to make it better is elaborate more. but you have a good beginning! nice job!! |