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Reviews For: When the lights go down

Somewhere In Between
2006-10-19
ch 1,
i love how the visuals in this change so much; so drastically; and so fast. it's heart stopping.

//Alex//
Guardrail
2006-09-14
ch 1,
I really liked this a lot. There seems to be a bit more to it than what the reader can see. I loved the last lines. Wonderfully written!!
BrokenandBeautiful
2006-09-14
ch 1,
o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o. i like it!! nice job... the only thing you could do to make it better is elaborate more. but you have a good beginning! nice job!!
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