JAYME SOUNDS SO FREAKIN CUTE! KAWAII! MAHO! *rolling around on the floor*
some random person: otaku freak.

AW! I find gay couples so kawaii cute! Even if they are ugly. I STIL FIND THEM SO FREAKIN CUTE! KAWAIII!

Hi! The german title of the story attracted my attention because, well i'm german and i think it's really brave to use another language in a story. well, i really liked the story and i will also read the other parts :) the german was not perfect but i could understand everything and if i wrote a story with Norwegian in it, i would sound like an idiot, so i think you did a good job. :)

Danke für die schöne Story!

Haha! This is helping me review some of the words we learned in my german class.

Aww this was adorable. I loved it! great job! :D

Is Hunter in love with River...? Idk, I guess I have a thing for drama. Even with the cutting emo boy routine the angst just isn't there...e the angst just isn't there...

Lol. Cute new boy introducing himself at the front of the class? Smitten main character? Lots of blushing? Aha, cliches galore.

Hehe, all the sentences are cute and awkward since english isn't your first language :D

River Fairbanks...? Omg, no really? Maybe introduce a character named Pond Oceanwave? Aha, lol.

Ugh. I'm such a bad person. I keep stereotyping Kaiser to be a typical fat german boy in lederhosen :L

I hope the word Scheibe(Scheisse) is used at 1 point :D

I really like this story so far but well i don't want to be rude but you misspelled the German word for father. It's spelled Vater.

xoxo GayLove

Pretty sweet story, Kaiser is adorable

Your English is the best in this chapter. I absolutely loved this book. Thanks so much for making this English, since you are Norwegian. I wish you would write more to this story. Thanks again for being an awesome wwriter

great so great

I loved this book so much and i cant wait to get it

i'm sorry i cheated! i looked up a german-to-english translator and i know wat Kaiser said! :D

i love this story, and i understand it completely considering i'm learning german in school, but the whole time my friend was just "What the heck are they SAYING!" It was pretty funny xD

aww this is really cute. the gemrna is pretty good. only wish you had included my favourite german word Schön meaning beautiful :) will read sequals promise.