i actually fellt it in my heart while reading this.

Incredible. The main feeling in this piece is longing, at least for me, and you pushed it into perspective. That was extremely gorgeous; good job.

You're definetely excellent at writing. Good work.

very strange. i like it!

Probably one of the best stories I've read all year. It's hard to find good, original literature these days. So descriptive and beautiful. I loved it.