I loved the third and fourth stanzas the best. I think you could actually lose the final 2 lines, or at least move them up into the middle of the fourth stanza and it might strengthen it overall--the ending of the fourth stanza is really powerful. You've got some gorgeous stuff in here :)

oh this is lovely.
"the ferry, personified and named, perhaps
loved by captain " & "prostrate on the floor"
-- i love the meanings in this.
the whole piece.
awesome.