|Reviews for The Best Day Of My Life|
| bright-silver-star 10/2/06 . chapter 1
i like it...its short...but sad and deep..kinda...and can u please update on everyone loves to hate someone soon-ish...its killing me...i love it
| Limited Edition 9/14/06 . chapter 1
I fricking love the ending XD
There is a general lack of emotion in the whole piece. Even though it's all about emotions, I don't feel any at all when reading it. It feels like it's just general fact, the tone. Almost impersonal. But I guess that was what you were going for.
The only mistake I found was: "His fist connected with my face, as in turn I connected with the floor." Don't use the same word twice...in the same sentence XD
Good work hun!
| x-kit-x 9/14/06 . chapter 1
Lol I love your tendancy to babble... it leaves me with stuff to read on the long, cold, lonely nights. Yup, I know - I need a life. This was really amazing and I think it's one of your best yet from a language point of view.