Unique. Generally good rhythm here, and it twists and turns through themes until the last one is hope--that's cool. I like the stanza made entirely of ellipses, lol! Realistic...

Hello! I Have Returned *JOY ETERNAL*
And So I return from a long break brought about by the renewed start of an evil we know more commonly as SCHOOL. *argh* So was my return much-awaited? Perhaps I'll never know...
SO, here's a notice here: I AM POSTING STUFF NOW SO COME READ. And that is all I'll say.
As for this poem... WOW, Whoo, Go WritingforJesus! ... I really liked that last stanza. If only people applied that not only to writing, but to all stuff in life... Yeah writing for the masses when you have something YOU want to express IS torture.
I LOVED THIS! Keep up the good work! (And to all you other peoples out there, I don't know why none of you have reviewed it! Come back and read it!)
~Pyraverne
p.s. I'm posting 09, and soon 10, of Everlasting... I'm letting people review 09 first though, and satiating my recent desire of keeping my readers in suspense.. but hey, the more reviews I get, the quicker the posting! ^^ So evil aren't I? JK.