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Reviews For: Seven Days Ago
Krizzie 2006-09-16 . chapter 1
wow... the curses of eating a banana... hehe
Xn-v 2006-09-15 . chapter 1
Uh ... I found it okay. Humourous though ^.^ which I guess is the point. Seems a little too random, but the writing is solid. Good job.
Olusenka 2006-09-15 . chapter 1
Haha, well what can I say? Amusing story. Good grammar, neat premise, the beginning was the best part of it. One of the better stories I have read on this site - concise and amusing. Critically speaking, I think the second half of this tale is not as good as the first, I'd rephrase it for more impact since you can kind of see what's coming. I would have loved to have seen the boss get served half a banana with the peel superglued for shape or something. A twist. Anyway without getting too carried away - good job, could have seen this in a magazine.
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