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sarah1491 2006-10-04 . chapter 1
Aww, it's so true.. and kinda sad. Yay for moths! :P I really lve it. :)

-sarah
Shanima 2006-09-16 . chapter 1
It's really sweet that you saw how much trouble the moth was having. You expressed it so nicely. I especially like where you compared it to the butterfly and bumblebee.

Shanima -x-
felicia13 2006-09-15 . chapter 1
Lovely, dear. I can feel this poem somehow ... I'm not sure, but it's quite excellent.

Moths are such ordinary creatures, aren't they? "Not like the butterfly, with brilliant wings," ...

I LOVED IT! BECAUSE IT DOMINATED. AND BECAUSE I THINK YOU ROCK!

Always Yours,Felicia.
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