like it? love it. is it meant to look like a rose, because thats what I get. I love it when people experiment and are different- really intresting formatting here. and i love the ending line: im not thirteen anymore. wow, this is good.

it hurts to grow up when you never even GOT roses at age thirteen;

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uwah! "i'm not thirteen anymore?" mm-mm-mm-mm-mm. brilliant.