Cool. I like this. It's kinda deep... great job!

great job! and the father..chaplin guy is like my new dad..im living with my best friend :D...pretty much

I know how this is cus this is how I am. Or at least how I was until I foud a guy to love me. No one gets it, why I feel/felt like this. But this poem is easy to relate to and kinda sad. Good work, keep it up.