Certainly an interesting poem. I like how you've used something like a panda to explore how people live. The style reminds me of something William Shatner would read, but maybe that's just the way I was reading it to myself. Very nice work. Keep writing! :)

Wow I really liked this a lot. I loved how it flows and your words are great. The lines, "the earth spins; can you keepup with thepace?" are amazing. Great work! I'm adding this to my favorite stories. Definately keep writing.