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| Nine-Black-Roses 2006-10-02 ch 1,  | abusewoahyour english teacher is totally rightthis poem is absolutely amazing, you have so much talent.wel done |
| awannabewriter 2006-09-17 ch 1, | abusebeautiful. Well done. |
| Jessie Leigh 2006-09-17 ch 1, | abusei like this one. you will have to tell me what your teacher thinks about it. |
| breezy nostrils 2006-09-16 ch 1, | abuseshort sweet and straight to the point. nice work. |
| silentscreamer07 2006-09-16 ch 1, | abuseFirst off, I really want to thank you for your reviews on my poems. Ecspecially on "Suicide", what you said, was very kind, and I truely appreciate it very much. It really does mean a lot to me. But now, on to your poem! :D I loved your title, first off. I think titles are something really important to a poem, and yours really draws the reader in to read your poem. And I agree with you, I LOVED this poem too! You had lovely rhyming, but it didn't stick out so much that you rhymed in the sense where it seems forced, or distracts you from the message of your poem. "Our hearts are open, our souls are bare.." I really loved that line, it stuck out the most to me. There is just a lot that that line can mean, and it really makes the reader think about what it is your poem is saying. Well done! Fantastic work! Keep it up! And hope to see more from you soon! ~Britney |
| Isabella22 2006-09-15 ch 1, | abuseOh my gosh, this is beautiful! I love it! Beautiful! |
| the-foresight 2006-09-15 ch 1, | abuseYou have good reason to love this, because it's really good. That's all I can say really. It's just really really good. |
| Captain Artemesia 2006-09-15 ch 1, | abuseI really like this poem...it has a tranquil beauty, and a great flow. |