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honey splattered brains 2009-10-20 . chapter 12
WELL WHAT THE ** DO YOU EXPECT FROM RICH. GOD. YOUR LUCKY YOU EVEN GOT A THANKS GAVIN. :| YOUR LUCKY YOU EVEN GOT TO TOUCH RICH'S DICK. GOODNESS GRACIOUS. UNGRATEFUL LITTLE PRICK. ... lol. gavin's such a cutie
honey splattered brains 2009-10-20 . chapter 3
aww. he sounds like such a sweetie and then he cant communicate for **. D: sounds like my brother
Someone 2009-09-06 . chapter 12
Ok 1. I'm an idiot for it taking me so long to find something related to your profile picture and then I stumbled across something but I wanted you to confirm it. Yeah that sounds so ominious. And ** I convinced my (ex no, for a different reason) college roomate that the "person" from highschool was my "stalker" without intending to, can someone say wtf holy **.Then my best friend moves to a whole different part of the country and is still there. And then one of my best friends is ditching me for new college buddies, and now I'm back in town after going to college a couple hours away, but that was months ago, no I go to a more local college but in 2 years or so I'll be moving again. Also I'm still contemplating who I'm actually in love/like/lust with. I've been avoiding one of my, used to be, best friends for a couple of years with no explanation when really I just want to get passed the whole maybe/maybe not having feelings for them and go back to being good friends but how the ** do you do that, when the last time you talked to them they didn't call you back and they usesd to date someone of the same sex for a little bit, were cheated on and feel like that whole part of their life was just a mistake and are now vehemently against homosexuality, bisexuality for religious reasons, and their somehow under the impression that you feel the same way because publically you kind of come off as supporting that view because you don't(as I haven't) voice your (my) opinion one way or the other so you kind of hesitate when they say something about you agreeing.Oh and then dating one of their lifelong bestfriends of the opposite sex before ya'll knew each other and everyone thinks ya'll were perfect together and you like them at the time but your the one who broke it off. Also so apparently now I've been to 3rd base with the opposite sex, twice, and I didn't ** feel anything it was like a game, and I was so confused the first time that I called up that friend who for some strange reason has been occupying my thoughts BEFORE they EVEN went out with that first person of their(both of our) same sex around 3-4 years ago,...and this person ISN't even the person I was alluding to in all my other reviews.

Not sure if you'll read this, or even if you'll update this story which you definitely need to but I just had to get this out because all those thoughts just came to me reading the last chapter of this story again. Also the person who I've basically been alluding to(actually there was two people on of the same sex and one of the opposite) but the main one is the one of the same sex who my former college roomate referred to(around a year ago) as my stalker, which in actuality there was no stalking on either side, I don't think so at least. Also I'm almost ** 20 which isn't even the drinking age here, although that's never stopped me(but on a personal note my social anxiety meds do, hence the other reason I've been "purposely avoiding" one of my friends off and on, ** I need to get this together because this whole situation of avoidance has been going on for as long as this story has been around. Damn I feel so useless and pathetic now, so thus ends my rant. Also do you have your own website/live journal and have you written some other stuff fanfic or original, before? Anyway Tearing Me Through is one of the best fanfics I've read, and definitely relatable, ;) .
LeahDude 2009-08-13 . chapter 12
Ugh. This would happen to me. I come across a nice story for a change then when it's getting somewhere, it stops updating itself...oh, wait, haha. It's updated by someone, isn't it? So why exactly hasn't it been updated since 23-06-08?...Oh my god. I feel like a strict mom telling off a naughty little child. The thought is disturbing and amusing at the same time. Don't mean to sound like a nag but...I like the story...it got left on a major cliffhanger and the author hasn't updated in ages...if you didn't get the fact that I was using by best whiney voice there considering it was in writing, I was. Wait, there is a way that I can express this. And NO, not in capitals, capitals are for anger or astonishment. We need a pure whiney voice here. So 'In her best whiney-voice, Leah pleaded the author: "Why hasn't it ben updated? I wannt it to be." Then proceeded to give the author evils.' I'm an awesome writer. Haha. Just kidding. But I want an update. I swear if you come back I will review every chapter you put up of this and I'll be your crazy-stalker fan! Deal? Good. Then update. NOW! See? Capitals are more forceful. You reduced me to a whiney child so I think I deserve to read it. Haha. I'm kidding. It's your story and everything but I want more! It was really good and I really want to read on.
dearie me 2009-08-10 . chapter 7
Rich gets the award for King of Mixed Signals.
dearie me 2009-08-10 . chapter 2
Urg! Brenda is a terrible name. It reminds me of Brandy/Brandi.

But, fantastic story. : D
amyfftl 2009-05-25 . chapter 12
Hi!

I know it's been at least 2-3 years since you updated this story, but PLEASE do so. You are truly a writer and this story made me get more interested in ready more fan fics. Anyways, keep it up and I really hope that this story gets finished one day.

Amy :)
AlwaysForTheGay 2009-04-06 . chapter 12
This story is ** amazing. D:

But...I'm afraid that you've died...since it hasn't updated in over 6 months...soo...

It made for great reading though. :D
narcissistic 2008-12-21 . chapter 12
Rich isnt very good with expressing his feelings.. he probably didnt know what to say..

Poor Gavin..i know i write that alot...he just wants some sort of recognision that maybe rich sees him as somethiing else...

and he's still going anorexic and bulimic for rich?? poor guy. such trama. Hopefully he inadvertedly mentions something about that and Rich says he thinks Gavin's body is perfect or sexily alluring.
narcissistic 2008-12-21 . chapter 11
i totally misjudged Selin and may i say i am pleasently surprised.. and finally they are getting somewhere in their relationship... Halligan is totally gay for gavin...i can totally see it. AND Thank god Rich stopped being such a butt-head.
narcissistic 2008-12-21 . chapter 10
wow Rich is seriously screwing him up... Poor Gavin. really the only one to blame is Rich and it's just so horrible and realistic.. trully i like your story. it isnt all sugar coated and flowers...it's real...just simply real.
narcissistic 2008-12-21 . chapter 9
aha he finally noticed his bracelet on Gavins wrist!! And there finally starting...scratch that..maybe RICH is finally going to be civilized to gavin.
narcissistic 2008-12-21 . chapter 8
Rich really wants his attention doesnt he? I still really feel bad for Gavin and his little sister. i mean she has AUTISM!! that's not somethiing you joke about to a persons face who has a sister with Autism.. ug he's just so horrible to him. i hope he gets over his little "I can't talk civially to him or else Gaven will find out I like him" thoughts.
narcissistic 2008-12-21 . chapter 7
Rich is so mean to gavein.. seriously if he doesnt do something about his atitude soon i'm opting for gavin to hate him!
narcissistic 2008-12-21 . chapter 6
Rich is happy cause Gavin likes boys!! and now Rich has a chance if he stops being such a douche.
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