This is really cool. I like the banter between the two. It really makes you think. A well written story. Not sure if its a one-shot or not, but I'd like to see it continue.

by the way, I'd really appreciate it if you could check out my story Strike Me Down.

Good luck with your writing.

Dice Darwin.

HAHA... the ending amused me. :]

I liked it! The whole thing, not just the ending.

Very intriguing. The banter's great. I would say "I wish there were more", but I think it might ruin it, it's perfect as a bare minimum snapshot. All in all, excellent stuff!

M, interesting view on the idea of love...I can't help feeling that even though the cynic disbelieves in love, isn't what they are about to do driven by love? Or at least spurned love, in any case.

And yes. I do believe in fish~