 t-t-t-ouch. 2007-08-25 . chapter 1Fragile and beautiful, but so real.
There are so many things I love about this poem.
Wonderful work. |
 smile for the sunshine 2007-07-12 . chapter 1You are a talented writer. This is creative. And good. I like the originality of a common topic. You added your own twist. I like that. |
 bittersweet.season 2007-02-08 . chapter 1this has so much honesty, like someone really made you feel this.
great. |
 Symphany is lyrical bliss 2007-01-29 . chapter 1I really enjoyed this. Its almost song like. Well written. =] |
 no.peace.los.angeles 2006-09-21 . chapter 1I really do love the last two lines. The rhyme is so appropriate, and I love the idea of a raindrop rhapsody. It's a pretty image. This is a nice love poem. It's rare that you find poems about the good side of love, and this one is really just nice. Keep writing! :) |
 classic violet 2006-09-20 . chapter 1oh god... I'm speechless.
this is... so ** brilliant. perfect to the core. how it ends tore at my inside, the message this sent out was tragic yet beautiful. amazing... just totally amazing. |
 The Fourth Fate 2006-09-17 . chapter 1Aw. I love how everything fits together. The rain and the tears... It's so sweet and sad. The ending was perfect. I really loved the break up of the lines, too. It's very pretty and... fragile. I love it. |
 give me back my childhood 2006-09-17 . chapter 1lovely. (: I loved the ending. |
 Singing After Dark 2006-09-15 . chapter 1like the lyrical poetic feel. very expressive and well written. ABA rhyme scheme is beautiful. Last lines are amazing. really. |
 Nigousan-Aoiro 2006-09-15 . chapter 1I love this poem, there is just so much in to to love and the way that the words are put togther...
Simply Amazing...Keep it up |