I understood a lot of this, and I ADORE it. The ending does confuse me because I got stumped by the language barrier and unfortunitely, I can't figure out if he really shot the other guy?

I like the significance of "color" in this poem, A LOT. Really, this is a very well written poem and I enjoyed reading it very much I think you did a great job and put just enough detail to give ideas of who the characters were but not too much detail to make it into a story.

I loved it.