Alright, as much as I LOVE this story, I feel the need to point out that you use two words incorrectly.

1) rap- unless you're talking about MC Hammer (simply 'cause he's better than the new rappers) you want to use wrap

2) except- okay this one I toatally get, but except is used in like: I before E, except after C. The way you se it should actually be accept. Like: I give you this gift, and you accept it.

Seriously, not big deals, but have you ever read a story or looked at something and it's the minor details that bug you? Yeah, that's totally this situation. Other than that they are fantastic stories.

This is a really good story. Your writing style is very appealing... especially this hot & steamy chapter ;)

And that's this one finished. xD Great stories, love them both (though I think I might like Scott/Luke's story better, not sure), and I hope you update them soon!

ITS OKIE! From the eyes from their mother?

Sweet! I love it so far! It's really well written, so keep going!

I have to say, the last part of the chapter seems a little rushed out.

So when I got onto fictionpress this morning and saw that this had been updated, I'm pretty sure my reaction was something like "OMFGUPDATEYES!" I am a rabid fan of this and HTSUYL: 101, and am sosososososo happy that they're still going. Judith needs a swift kick in the face (and so does her husband), the witch. I hope Charlie is okay and I cannot wait for more of both stories!

Hey, love the new chapter!! I can't wait for a new one! Sex?! please... please... please... lol! MORE SOON I can't wait!

~shadow

OK! ATTEMPT TO REVIEW NUMBER THREE! Yes you heard correct number three. Funny stories actually. The first time I tried to review for this story I was in communications Tech. Sir got all angry when he caught me for like the 8th time not doing work. So he was like "Mr. Delaney I will take away you computer account!" SO I went back to my work. The attempt number two was after lunch that day. When I was in healthy living. we came over to the same lab and I had to search up this drug i was assigned to find information about. Sir caught me attepting to review and got angry and made a fool out of me and was like "OUT!OUT!". So now im at home writing attempt number 3. Which will suceed. Unless my computer explodes. Then I would say your story is cursed. So. Right back to the story. I like this story alot. With the whole adult and children(well young adult) They seem to be a really good pair. But considering there age and everything. I would expect more a angst kinda story. They keep thinking its wrong. Which I know is mentioned in the story just for Nathe being a grown men. I was guessing he would stop...But other wise. I like this story as well as the other one. So I cant wait for the next chapter.

YaY! No explosions!

ArchArrow~

I'm so glad you're back with some new stuff! Damn, I love Travis/Nathe. They're perfect together. I didn't get the alert for this one yet, sadly, but luckily I've taken up the habit of checking the website.
Kudos on this one.. Nathe loves Travis! I wonder how long he's felt this way? Update soon, it was such a cruel wait ;)

wow, hot.

unexpected though, eh, well maybe not. I just you know he is sort of reponsible for him so it's kinda wrong, but then that I think makes it even hotter.

they are so sweet to each other, they are so good for each other. Glad you finally updated!

Yey, finally a new chapter!!^__^ And what a chapter!!^__~ I'm so happy for the two!!^__~

This is just as good as the other one, maybe even better! Update!

I love it!!

OMG its about damn time! MORE SOON and sorry i didnt review the last chapter we dont have internet and right now im at work so... MORE SOON please!