|Reviews for Do I Look Like Arsene Lupin To You?|
| Tytherpol 9/15/06 . chapter 1
I don't think there really is a need for the commas in "No you, haven't a clue, do you?", but that's really not important. I like it. It reminds me of this kid at my school that thinks he's just so troubled and angsty and I just want to slap him every time he speaks a word. But I still almost worship him and comply ot anything he wants.
| xForeverAndAlwaysx 9/15/06 . chapter 1
this is really good, i can totally hear this as the lyrics of a song. i love the way you begin - like your first stanza. great great work.