I don't know. It's pretty cool. I don't really like haikus though. I just kinda liked this because you're talking about unrequited love which I never understood the signifigance of until last year when this weird kid that sat behind me in helth let me read his creative writing journal and he talked about it. It made it finally personal to me. And of course, it was about me =(. But nice angsty, silly, short, beautiful thing. ~Always, Sara