i like then end with the connection of walls and chambers. It worked all very well and i thought it was a great idea and you carried it out spledidly! By the way thank you so much for youre kinds words on my poem. That really was the best review i've ever had! I hope to hear from you soon too!

"the lingering wisps ofdistress and anguishthat once haunted me.And your wordsopen wounds I thought had healed."

this whole bit i found to be one of the strongest parts of the poem. or at least i really liked the whole image! Good job!

very relatable. thx for sharing and thanks for the review.