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the.pink.life
2006-09-17
ch 1,
abuseI absolutely love the way this is formatted. You ask a great question at the end, with this whole feeling of I don't know who I am, so how can other people really know who I am? And you bring up a lot of good points throughout this - people are constantly judging each other all the time, as much as we say we don't judge others. Great job with this poem. Keep writing! :)
Warg
2006-09-15
ch 1,
abuseGreat work here.

Relatable, smooth and natural sounding pitch. The ending is toned nicely too.

Very nice.

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