Wonderful images in this. Beautifully written.

I love that one of the things you hate is this girl smiling at jokes. That's so creative. And original. And the image of lying there thinking up ways to change the world makes me smile. Nice work. Keep writing! :)

are you stealin people's lovers megan... let me find out... or is this a lover that you hid from us all?

I love the middle stanza because I love laying there listening to the rain/soft music at night with the one person you love the most in the world. (I just said "love" a lot).

Fantastic poem.

I'm guessing from your LJ posts that I vaguely know what this is about. I love the simplicity of the poem, the two stanzas of love vs. hate. I love the like "and lies in the dark with me with the music low", it's just- nice to imagine.

the second part to it = love. =D

god. stop being so talented!

this is lovely. written so nicely, so pretty . . . & it has you in it. im not sure how else to put it.